Comments of chapter undefined of A Nascent Kaleidoscope.

Please don't make the the mc go back to human school, I still don't get why almost every Dxd mc goes to the high school just to waste his time playing human or mundane.

This story has been... unexpectedly interesting. Well written, not a translation, no grammatical errors. The MC is a curious mix of something like 60% MC 40% Kischur, which is an interesting blend. Usually people go either 100%/0%, or 90/10, but your character feels like a believable fusion. Small touches like liking older, stylish clothing adds that touch of authenticity. I can't believe that he's in Skyrim without knowing anything about Skyrim, though... A few ones. One, I pray to any listening god that he doesn't immediately join the devil faction and get involved with Rias or Sona, like 99% of DxD fics. Or easily forgive his father. It would be such a change of pace for him to actually be distant, independent and resentful for a very long time... you shouldn't forgive a lifetime of abandonment and resentment just because the characters are plot relevant. Two, I also pray that he never goes back to school. Anyways, the MC seems... fine? He's a bit on the sensitive side, but I think you can still relate to him pretty well. It's clear he has the memories, but not the experience. I think I've enjoyed watching the MC grow, though I think he could use to be a bit more ruthless, though that's just to my taste.

I love the way youve written the mc he actually seems like hes a mature old man in the body of a Teen

I hope he awakens his power of destruction

I like where this is going, go on. And thank god no unnecessary bashing so more plus points for you. Really gotta appreciate the fact that you fleshed out the reason why they were acting like that.

So next world is Fate , I hope he adds Rin into harem and maybe Sakura I always feel bad about her

Thanks for the fantastic chapter! I found this today and couldn't stop reading! I'm excited for both his return to DxD and him getting a power-up from Skyrim!

Hope ajuka doesn't make sense if the calculations bc ges nowhere near smart enough for him to be able to use kaleidoscope

This is very interesting, no abandonment or neglect issues just sirzechs being a fool and hiding his half devil child

Ayaaaaaaaa when they will understand the sheer power of the Kaleidoscope, it will be fun to read their reactions !

Good chapter. Have been thinking about what happened In DXD after he left. Need more DXD chapters~

I love Skyrim, but I am also excited to see him go back to DxD, maybe he will become a part of the mages guild there, get involved in politics as a way to troll people, I haven't seen any of THAT part of Zelretch yet.

Okay so, i didn't play skyrim and don't know about it. Do I have to know about it to watch this part or just wait for next world? Anyways thanks for the chapter....

Good story so far but the only the dragon thing going on with issie cause i don't like when there's a oc but they still try to involve issie. I love issie but when I'm reading a story with a oc i don't want to see issie cause if i did i would read the original story or a fan fiction with him as a center. So i hope you don't plan to have issie involve too much in the story.

He is clone of wizard marshall?

Gracias por el capítulo

Buena historia , ya done piedras , me gusta que vimos las reacciones de los personajes de DxD a la situación del MC. Por cierto , no entiendo cómo es que Issei se está "convirtiendo en dragón"?? Cuando nisiquiera tiene el sacred gear...una ves que se lo quitaron , tendría que ser un humano normal no??

Thanks for the chapter

How did mc's mother died?