Comments of chapter undefined of Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse

I would love to work in that factory. They let you drink beer on your coffee break

Shouldn’t the planet still be moving when he’s paused? He should have crashed into a bulding at high speeds and or be in empty space.

That was hot, quite literally

😂😂🔥

Interesting

looks promising

not as if im not noting the vocabulary used on this chap.....

Good so far, no grammar mistakes, very good worldbuilding, realistic reactions, maybe only con is very early POV change, but not a big issue. interesting stuff

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So... 2 MC?

Is the cover is lilith from guardian tales?

Okay. 1st chapter definitely has me wanting to read more. The sudden multiple suicide attempts to start off the story is a really intense start! And then the random magic dirt guy running into Hannibal Lecter, I'm thinking I'm gonna like this story alot lol.

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Thanks for the chap

fire

confusing but interesting start

I see potential

Gonna give the novel a shot, seems somewhat interesting, though gonna have a hard time caring about a MC that from the very begining showed how weak willed of a person he is.

ZA WARUDO!!!!