So far it's looking good but him getting shy around a woman reminds me of the Japanese protagonist which was turn off but I hope he does grow from this being 20 years old or 22 since we being told a story that happened two years ago for him to run away or never talk about what happened.
Don't mind too much about my re-write of some sentences, sometimes want to give my pieces of ideas. Whenever i'm bored I correct stuff if there're đ¶đ¶đ¶