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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
The grammar is incredibly lacking, to the point it’s hard not to effect the reading experience.
(You’re being granted) I feel like I missed something. Are we supposed to understand that ending? Is there a translation issue or something? I’m lost… 😵💫
Content is good. But, grammar needs some improvement
Interesting start! I must say this got potential! Just reach 200 plus chaps in the future and this will sell like pancakes.
The contents and conversations dose not really match the settings or age of characters.
This needs an editor. The English is bad.
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bout to mildly hug someone
This novel is not for me at the moment so I will read some more to be sure.
I like the story so far
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
Interesting so far