NunuXD
well, while game making arc is really good i find lately the chapter became boring but considering interaction & relationship is necessary in a story it's a bit too much and too early for relationship & romance, i mean it's better to make the 2nd game first then you could build up the interaction with marvel characters from your game like become in-game friends first then have meet up with them, etc.
Too fast I think...I mean, from what I know you haven't known Ana for long, you could say that from a week to 4 days. Unless there's a time skip that I didn't realize. Apart from that it seems that manipulating ana filling so quickly. Keep in mind that she has never been able to touch, hug and much less kiss someone without practically killing that person. So I see it as a manipulation to bring a kiss to that friendship because they are definitely not a couple they know each other for a very short time for something like that. As I said I'm not sure if there was a time skip. But if there wasn't this is rushed, meaningless and manipulated too.