Comments of chapter undefined of MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM

I found you in the rankings when there were 3 chapters

Great story so far! I love this genre of fanfictions but there are rarely any. I do hope you stay in the game-creating and reactions theme instead of trying to make the MC get involved in the Marvel plot like in the other game fanfic "Game Creator on Marvel" whose MC seems to be planning to get involved with Tony Stark instead of sticking to the gaming theme. I think it is much more enjoyable to see the game creating process and the reactions of the players rather than getting needlessly involved in the plot. It is fine to see how the game will affect the plot of the universe he is in, but involving himself seems pointless to the theme of the story. If you do want the characters to interact then something that would be interesting to see is making the MC go in his own games to play and meeting the other characters. After all, only watching people play may get boring for the MC so playing the games with others would be fun especially if they are total newbies to the game.

I hope you don't make the same mistake as in the other novel, where people act like it's normal for a game to transport you to another world. You have to show people's reaction to this technology, especially Shield trying at all costs to find the owner.

Thanks for the great chap, looking forward to more! Also I think you entered the rankings.

Thanks for the chapter

Put this in an auxiliary chapter, or in a chapter of its own, this is the second chapter you do this and I've lost count of how many times my browser crashed because of it...

thanks for the chapter

Good chapter

Thanks for the chapter

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thanks for the chapter

Lost me here sorry having someone who can create game and transport thousands of people to his games in mavel would last all of 2 seconds before being captured disected and controlled by someone thought he was just going to use games as a way to build a empire best of luck though.

I want more more

Keep up the good work.

Thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter 👍

How nostalgic...—me and my cousin met a German boy through Minecraft when we were younger,, his name was Nick he was nice and very fun to play with even if I was trash at playing and basically just liked to build while they try out mods and go to diff servers with my cousin... Lost contact since my cousin lives a few cities away, I hope he is doing well after all these years...