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Comments of chapter undefined of One Piece: Seaside System

llaube
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thanks for the chapter

RealmSeeker
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Thanks for the chapter. I don’t really understand the main character’s personality. It’s like he completely lacks self awareness at times unable to understand his own actions. As it stands he has no tangible drive aside from revenge thats no longer possible. I think before anything else his character needs to be more fleshed to help readers understand what kind of person he is and explain his decisions.

Bad_news_83
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Hina +1 harem Hot smoking beauty She really like cigarettes Instead of giving her some flowers give her 2 pac of cigarettes

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Boa Hancock +1 harem

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Melshan
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This attitude from the MC is very disappointing, he should go his way.

Darkaiju
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I really like this story. I hope that in the future the MC meets the guy he switched places with and defeats him so he can take back all the skyscraper that was taken. Because I have the impression that if we leave that aside it will leave a hollow. But otherwise I will look forward to the next chapter. And if the MC takes the dragon fruit at punk hazard will it be pink or another color? I wish you good luck with your writing and congratulations again.

Azure_light_3442
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the main character can't do anything other than complaining so pathetic

Hadjii
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Boys, you can read the full series on fiction live. Though the story hasn't been updated for months so there's that

Daoist0DgSPB
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Hey author, I don't know if the story was abandoned on this platform, if you're posting chapters elsewhere or if it's already dropped, but I want to know if there will still be a chapter of this story

GalaxyDWolf
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I’m gonna have offer some different devil fruits cause I really think the dragon fruit is kinda overrated when it comes to fanfics. Take the metal metal fruit from the guy here The axolotol fruit The bomb bomb fruit from mister 5 (in my opinion this fruit is hella underrated and completely underused. This fruit would make the user a great hand to hand fighter plus he could pull a gambit and charge items into bombs.) Vibration fruit (this would be an OC fruit but it’s a weaker but more versatile version of whitebeard fruit. For references think the flash for speed and vibrating his molecules to imitate logia’s intangibility)

Gratiz_
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So forced...

Hadjii
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Dragon_forever
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Thx

Anthony_Nguyen_0554
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Where's the new chapters?

Ceaseless_Voices
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Aaaaaaaaa I need more

Bebells
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Obrigado pelo capitulo

Hanni_Baal
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TFTC!

Hollow_Daoist
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thanks for the chapters

sebas_tian_3956
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Jayson_Ultrix
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