Comments of chapter undefined of Game of Thrones : Paladin of Old Gods (Draft)

I would prefer them all, but try not to stretch them out too long. The byplay has been hilarious, but don’t overuse it. Great chapter, tho!

I thought that as the leader, Ned would be more calm, wise, and less aggressive. Specially when MC is already trying to show that he means no harm. Ned felt a little too aggressive, fearful, and disrespectful. Thanks for the chapter.

Some might say, that Ned's reactions were overplayed. And they kinda were, but please put yourself into his shoes for a moment: The person who's on the other side of those conversations is a child. A child, who's more conniving, scheming and plotting than anyone he's ever met. His mask breaks this severely only because he he believes, that they are loyal. He feels somewhat safe and needs the outlet, lest he goes crazy. Also keep in mind, that this version is what, 26 years old? The immensity of Duncan's plans is way above everything he has ever planned in his tenure. He isn't just called the quiet wolf because he himself is a silent type. He also doesn't like to ruffle feathers and make big moves unless it's absolutely necessary. And basically everything, that Duncan plans is a big move... Cheers fellas! Have a good start into a new and hopefully exciting new year.

Having the Stark call the Mc monster and devil or devil mind was so stupid and bad.. author make Stark look like a 16 yold boy who has not rule for 10years and has not fight and won wars! This was very unrealistic, i dont even talk about benjen who is already at the wall..lets say he is not -_- !

Happy New Year, and thanks for the chapter.

Thank you for another great chapter! Have my power stone!

There should be in north a Jade stones some where he can mine them. And yes plz tell us the other six

one of the best chapter who i read. happy new year

great chapter happy new year

I need to know them ALL! lol great job BTW

this episode was brilliant, the ending is very well written. Mr author i love this book of yours, keep going. Happy new years

this whole story of mc simp targaryen is getting very boring, I don't know why so careful with jon snow

I'm still waiting for explanation why giving bank to Dustin was good idea....

Man, mc is turning into real boring person. Now he became another Targaryen simp. And if his goal is to get Jon to throne, giving him Moat cailin is bad idea. After all that would mean crown would own moat cailin, making it kinda useless for defending north. Sure, Jon wouldn't do anything, but what of his kids? Ned's original idea of giving Moat to his own children is correct. Besides, he's just as safe in Winterfell.

I thank you for the chapter.

Yes I would. Great chapter

thanks for the chapter

Awesome chapter! Grazie per le risate e auguri di buon anno!

I don't Lord Stark would last more than three requests at this rate.

It will be looong road ;-)