i can feel the emotions, the exitement, the fear lily has.

amazing, this seems VERY exciting. I mean i feel a weight in my stomach thinking of poor lily

what an epic episode wooow

ah indeed love can sting, but it carresses more softly than anything else. glad to have you back and be well Duncan Randar

i would love to know if everything is alright with you. Glad you are back either way

i don't understand what the special technique does exactly!!

are u ok mr author, been a while since u last posted

forget about the double standard this is just weird i mean what kimd of self respecting person would do this....makes no sense

very well done, a bit over the top at times, finding myself confused in between words or "respect" that characters give each othe, a very good read nonetheless. Can't wait to read more👌👍

fluff...too much fluff i feel smothered.....i dunno what to feel abt it

so, Top D is my nee favorite character hahahah

so are we all going to ignore it....what'd the brown bunny incident???

eat this you snake faced noseless pale psychopath!!!!

i am confused and worried....what is the future hiding for our dear characters

amazing chapter....

you have my stones, my comments, my attention and my love.....whag more do you desire dear author

the plot thickens

great chapter as usual. i would have loved to read more

i can't wait to read more. this was excellent hahaha

Amazing, you really are a very talented writer. keep going my friend ( well we don't even kniw each other but you get it)