Abadom
A lot of filler dialogue here. Most of the contents of most of the chapters could be completely cut and it wouldn't of made a difference. the author needs to be more considerate about what they write. A lot of the time it's just stuff that belongs in the background. A chapter should advance the plot in someway, or at least set up a plot advancement nicely. Your chapters fail to do this and it makes reading your story tedious. I could skip dozens of chapters at a time and usually not miss anything important. I think you just stretch your arcs out too far. realistically it shouldn't take any more than 15-20 chapters to finish an arc.
I usually write 1.5 to 2k words of pure chapter, then, as I edit the chapter, I add around 1k to 1.5 K more words to have the chapter be around 2.5 to 3.5 k words long, so yes, most of these are filler, but the story is progressing in the pace I believe its right, that being 1.5 to 2k words long per chapter, the rest is to make the story more concise, nothing else
ahhhh how is it possible that the chapters are so short that I smoke them in less than 1 minute, maybe you are scamming us by putting more space between the lines? đ« Excellent way to introduce a new character (I think so) I imagine that Via is the most sensible part or Bell's counterpart as twins