Abadom
A lot of filler dialogue here. Most of the contents of most of the chapters could be completely cut and it wouldn't of made a difference. the author needs to be more considerate about what they write. A lot of the time it's just stuff that belongs in the background. A chapter should advance the plot in someway, or at least set up a plot advancement nicely. Your chapters fail to do this and it makes reading your story tedious. I could skip dozens of chapters at a time and usually not miss anything important. I think you just stretch your arcs out too far. realistically it shouldn't take any more than 15-20 chapters to finish an arc.
ahhhh how is it possible that the chapters are so short that I smoke them in less than 1 minute, maybe you are scamming us by putting more space between the lines? đ« Excellent way to introduce a new character (I think so) I imagine that Via is the most sensible part or Bell's counterpart as twins