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Comments of chapter undefined of In Danmachi with Plasmids

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Fickle_as_light
Fickle_as_lightLv4Fickle_as_light

this chapter felt short man

Abadom
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It's 3k words long lol

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Shota_Prince
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NoveltyNovelty
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Fran33347637
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ahhhh how is it possible that the chapters are so short that I smoke them in less than 1 minute, maybe you are scamming us by putting more space between the lines? đŸ”« Excellent way to introduce a new character (I think so) I imagine that Via is the most sensible part or Bell's counterpart as twins

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JustDefy
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Here's to hoping Artemis encounters zeus and is forced to punish his pervertedness

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omnipotence
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MrMike
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Thanks for the great chapter! Looking forward to more!

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Classic_Balrog
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Thanks for the chapter

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Nate_Rivers_5514
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I'll accurate some chapters before coming back!

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smilesssss
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_MCkekskuchen_
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Nice chap thanks

Alfiemooon
AlfiemooonLv4Alfiemooon

A lot of filler dialogue here. Most of the contents of most of the chapters could be completely cut and it wouldn't of made a difference. the author needs to be more considerate about what they write. A lot of the time it's just stuff that belongs in the background. A chapter should advance the plot in someway, or at least set up a plot advancement nicely. Your chapters fail to do this and it makes reading your story tedious. I could skip dozens of chapters at a time and usually not miss anything important. I think you just stretch your arcs out too far. realistically it shouldn't take any more than 15-20 chapters to finish an arc.