Comments of chapter undefined of In Danmachi with Plasmids

> Amen, Brother. Oh no! I sure hope the mc don't accidentally introduce Christianity in Orario; that suck~

This narrative style is hard to follow. The constant change between 3rd person and 1st person narration really makes reading this a chore.

Whhhhhyyyy, why aren't you using quotation mark? Symbol is specially created for quotation and yet your not using it making some conversation confusing.

pls author sort out perspective is it 1st or 3rd person because the constant change from I and he is really the only problem in this writing

Women and dogs are loved unconditionally, men are only valued when they provide something.

Thanks for the great chap! Happy Birthday!

So far this might be one of the best Danmachi fanfics.

I like!!

Thanks for the chapter!

nice

Does that mean the canon starts in three years? isn't that too long?

I somewhat hope in the future he walks by again seeing the poor guy get his revenge on his ex wife and ex friend

Bruh if i were adam i would've dropkicked the wife..

Thx

its quite good. i would recommend using "" for talking but - is fine as well. cant wait for the next chapter keep up the good work

Thanks for the chapter.

Deja de retrasar las cosas, alargaste que no vaya al gremio en todo el cap

as I'm listening to these chapters there's spontaneous "slash" that I suppose the person featured in that paragraph does against flying insects for hand eye training or maybe they use bladed weapons against bugs because no one's invented the fly swatter that makes a "swat" noise. 🤔

Thanks for the chapter