Aoki_Aku
Finally something good! It has been so long since I found something readable. The pacing is fine but I feel like the author needs to describe the surroundings and the atmosphere more. I have quite an imaginative mind which is fine and all but there has to be a limit. If the surroundings are not described properly then my imagination will go wild and imagine the most absurd things, ruining the experience. If I know where the MC is and what it's supposed to look like, then the whole experience will be a much smoother and more immersive ride. Overall though, it's an amazing first chapter.
I feel that this chapter was rushed? The fights were to fast that I didn't even got the taste of accomplishment for the MC, the way you wrote the fight against the boss the only thing I felt was disappointment, "this is it?" I though, I wish you could give more substance to the fights and his actions. Thanks for the chapter! Much love and stay safe~