CORNBRINGER
Hey Corn, quick question. Why is Alex hunting her? I can see him not approving of the whole eating eternal business and he probably wouldn't let her eat Earth's celestial, if only because I'd probably destroy the planet, but there are other celestials in the universe, namely Ego, and Alice could probably skip the Eternals if Alex just weakened Ego first. And the TVA aren't exactly good guys, I don't know if you intend to bring Sylvie into the story but there is an argument to be made for them taking away free will and I don't see Alex liking them. So why does he seem to be so against Alice and her goals?
Hmm, so half the cast go full stupid this chapter with fury trying to promise no taxes to a guy that doesn't need anything, an eternal that for some reason thinks the people that saved her are the bad guys and finally Alex forgets that he has the space stone and can instantly locate anyone in the universe and teleport there. I can understand pushing a plot but typically it needs a narrative reason rather than a forced one. It would have been fun if Alice body jacked someone or something rather than just 'welp she's not on the planet anymore I guess it's not our problem!'.