Ghost_84
I don't see the last few chapters leading anywhere. Except to establish a forced friendship for Thor. This hardly counts as a DxD fanfic
Who cares, lots of fanfics do this besides, if it was a regular dxd fanfic it won’t be as good, cause the fact is that dxd has really bad plot
3PoundsOfRice:Pure originality that in many cases contradicts the DxD canon. Not to mention how confused the author is with the levels of power. DxD is more than Issei and co. Really, they spend chapters and chapters showing characters that do not contribute anything to the plot, the plot is totally unfocused.
At lastt new update!, just a quick thought i think there is a need for direction in each chapter while it is very interesting to see MC journey to each mythology (and rejecting the hoe), i think the story needs to be more direct, what goals that MC wants to accomplished in each mythology pantheon (recruiting people, getting equipment etc)...