Comments of chapter undefined of Vile Evil Hides Under The Veil

Ugh... So long dialogue... It would be much better if it gets reduce

Good chapter but the dialogue really is far to long. 4 paragraphs explaining a snake that i doubt will be seen again

Good progress .

Tthe dialog maybe long like other said, but at least it not at the 'annoying' level

So far so good

as everyone else is saying the dialogue has gotten a bit draining and we havent even had any action Til now

so much useless dialogue

thank you for the new chapter

Plot armor activated

Why she ask for his name when she already said his name?

author always likes to write a will whenever a character speaks. annoying

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thx for the chap

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