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Comments of chapter undefined of Magus of the Wizarding World

James_Pouder
James_PouderLv15James_Pouder

from a great story to forced plot garbage. seriously whats the point of time turners when you just slap in the time police from DBZ I mean what trash and forced reset to Canon. went from a great read to completely disappointing.

Dfyz58869050
Dfyz58869050Lv2Dfyz58869050

To be honest, since Hermione's death, the plot has become too uninteresting. With this chapter, I perhaps say goodbye to your book. I wish the author success, interesting stories

Brokedepressed
BrokedepressedLv14Brokedepressed

Well it was fun while it lasted.

Esdeaths_Slave
Esdeaths_SlaveLv4Esdeaths_Slave

Could care less about hermione dont know why so many people are upset about her death and how the plot is moving. Keep up the good work author and the plot has finally picked up wonder what the mc is gonna do next.

Pa7adox
Pa7adoxLv12Pa7adox

So basically you wrote 130+ chapters of nothing seeing as that universe was reset...meaning whatever plot and story you wrote was erased.

ZaP_Tempest
ZaP_TempestLv4ZaP_Tempest

Thank you for the chapter! And maybe grab a few Infinity stone paper weights on his way out? hmm?

Ballad
BalladLv5Ballad

This is actually much more interesting than the annoying hermione nonsense. Didn't like how MC went all oh bohoo blah blah but now with TVA involved he has a chance for alot of power.

Adrianix1234
Adrianix1234Lv14Adrianix1234

More!!!

Saucy_boy
Saucy_boyLv4Saucy_boy

This book is a roller coaster, after hermione’s death the plot slowed down a lot and became uninteresting, now it’s doing a great comeback, good job author

Redery
RederyLv4Redery

Dang I just had to catch up at the climax this is just now getting good

Morkail
MorkailLv1Morkail

I’m still hung up on the fact he left his original time line to make a new one completely ignoring the fact he still left his original timeline and everyone in it to die basically. Also doesn’t servering soul like this make him undead or something.

raisin_man
raisin_manLv14raisin_man

Nice. I like the solution. I still hope he can save Hermoine and Penelope while still getting back to his timeline

Noah_Thomas_0343
Noah_Thomas_0343Lv4Noah_Thomas_0343

why didn't he just go back to his own body? like Sarah could've combine both herself and him giving a huge increase considering their the same person

ElG0hary
ElG0haryLv5ElG0hary

make it that after his escape he would be gone to mcu not his original crossover

LazyKiller1632
LazyKiller1632Lv13LazyKiller1632

thanks for the chapter

Whytea
WhyteaLv4Whytea

I wish I had the time stone so I could read ahead...

Marduk8
Marduk8Lv15Marduk8

Time shenigans... Dunno I think I'm out this gets to convoluted ⌚😅

asdasdssf
asdasdssfLv1asdasdssf

This is why I always get annoyed by time turner being included in ff. Due to how HP is written, it isn't such an big deal in the canon. But for ff where we follow mc trying to explore magic it's huge issue.

James_Pouder
James_PouderLv15James_Pouder

yea I'm done.

luisfer
luisferLv6luisfer

It would be great if Matthew learned a way to defend himself from the TVA so they don't have a chance to capture him, I also wonder how he plans to create another body

Ruizuhb
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