Navy_King
This is one of the best naruto fandom fanfiction you have read, the template system is an original and great idea. Thanks to the author for alleviating my boredom. I wish you (the author) would write volume 2 in full disclosure of ichigo kurasaki's abilities and maybe with a new formulaic hero. Thanks again to author sun for completing this amazing fanfic. I look forward to your future works
you were wrong in many points, but there is no perfect story, and there are mistakes that weigh more than others depending on the person, I at least found kurenai's character useless, as well as useless an irresponsible person who is not mature enough to have children, since who seemed to put her husband above everything, even her children, I hated her character, but the story wasn't so bad, it had good parts, and at least you had the courage to write and "finish" the story, it's already much better than people who do 30 chapters and go on "temporary" hiatus.
to rell you the truth I am really bored of fanfic template systems that give op character from the beginning like if we were to classify the templates to tiers 1-normal human 2- peak human 3- super human 4- demigod and 5- godly and the author directly gives a powerful template from the beginning without character development it can be like Gacha like there might be a chance to get a trash template but also get a moderately stronger also in the stories I read thus far only the famous known characters show but what about less known characters or Original characters?
my friend, thanks for the journey. despite what others said about your plot or story, be brave and strong, you are doing great (really great I think). a lot of plot in the story make me surprise and u mix the power is good too. tastes of the readers is like tastes of humans tought, everybody have their own taste. you don't need to worry about that. u have your own style and creativity in your writing. don't let others opinions limit your imagination. hope the best for u. your Reader's and fans. thanks for the journey.