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Do you have a link to the mtl or to the raw?

no

link to the mtl or raw please

Well, I think it's time for me to drop this fic... The story has become worse and worse since the New York arc. the part in Sweden was kind of nice so it gave me hope for this fic but since the prison break part, I lost hope again Honestly, I didn't even read the last another POV chapters, I was waiting for the end of this arc but once again, disappointed I don't know what is it about your MC but he's just not likeable at all. And your story is also all over the place, it's like it's written by a kid In conclu, that's it for me. I had high hope for this fic at the beginning, I was really enjoying but it was all for nothing at the end

I always feel that the Mc is nerfed in your story....

Okay, keep the good work. it's a nice novel

Well, I thought this novel is a traduction and I wanna know the original name so that I can find it

What's the raw name or link?

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he asked for 2 wishes I don't even know why you gave him a wish in the first place for a sword... that's stupid... You're kind of killing your fic since the last few chapters

honestly, I don't think you realize how OP the boost capability is when I see how much the MC struggle woth ennemies his level Seems to me that you don't know how to manage correctly power levels It make me pessimistic for the following of your story

with just the punch

honestly, with how much boost he used and taking into consideration the orc lord level ans rias level as a comparaison, the head of the orc lord should have exploded

This is really bad THE concept is nice but the MC is a huge Simp like I rarely saw before. I don't recommend at all unless your a cucklord or you want to bang your head on a wall.

he should be way stronger than shanks, you're overestimating shanks a lot

it is very very very dumb to give his Chakra to orochimaru. I don't understand why you did that...

why is he losing life span when he come back in time?