It's ok but could be improved in writing ....................................................................................................................................
Killing all the Marines would lead to pirates roaming without consequences...this is a big problem..and in the Anime..most of shells town Marines were oppressed by Morgans and wanted to save people.
Good shit....................,............................................................................................................................................................................
Is there a valid reason for him hating homosexuals....Like I don't care if they leave me alone,the can do whatever they want but he seems to be disgusted with them for no reason at all....
Pretty good but bland.......emotions are not projected correctly.Could improve a lot if it wasn't just conversations and added remarks about surroundings..people etc.
Good Shit...........................................................................................Damn word count.............................holy.................