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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Template System

Mr_Ryu
Mr_RyuLv13Mr_Ryu

Nooooooooo

DaoistIdXsIO
DaoistIdXsIOLv3DaoistIdXsIO

Village gets invaded by zombies MC: Let's play around while everyone dies, this isn't even my final form

Clasher_805
Clasher_805Lv10Clasher_805

Snakey: I don't want to see one

DetachedDreamer
DetachedDreamerLv14DetachedDreamer

and everyone forgives him? he said he did it to protect them but he was literally helping the enemy. Now he's goku who let's his people die because he wants a good match instead of going all out? overall good story but arcs thats change someone's identity just for a reveal suck. always. for all the good fight scenes, the actually story of the arc was no good.

Tatsumi810
Tatsumi810Lv13Tatsumi810

Nice chapter

Navy_King
Navy_KingAuthorNavy_King

Aokiji Fanfic I will update it 30 days later, because I have completely wrote this book, so after taking some rest, I will start writing it

YuanMonarch
YuanMonarchLv4YuanMonarch

haaaaaa............. Finally hehehehehe **don't mind me I am just happy** hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe

Rehcra
RehcraLv4Rehcra

You are certainly a master at holding your readers by the balls author-kun

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Ghastly_Clown
Ghastly_ClownLv5Ghastly_Clown

yo author have you seen a shinigami yet? you will see him soon if you keep this Dao [img=faceslap]

Zeyziel
ZeyzielLv14Zeyziel

I almost stopped reading the chapter d part he finally removed d mask and drama started... I skipped to d part he went into sage mode

Weizenbrot14
Weizenbrot14Lv4Weizenbrot14

satisfaction

MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5MorningWood_Dao

overall good chap. just feels a little bit forced on the drama part.

Mickeal_wezozski
Mickeal_wezozskiLv4Mickeal_wezozski

ThoTslayer_10l
ThoTslayer_10lLv4ThoTslayer_10l

Kukuku I cqn sleep peacefully

Saf4
Saf4Lv10Saf4

This fanfic need to end ASAP.

Krishnbarad
KrishnbaradLv4Krishnbarad

still didn't get a getsuga tenshou

Smol_Asian_Boi
Smol_Asian_BoiLv13Smol_Asian_Boi

Thanks for the chapter

Mrmore
MrmoreLv4Mrmore

Thanks for the chapter

koryu
koryuLv4koryu

GEEEEZ FINALLLY!! I liked the beating Kurenai gave him, it was somewhat heartwarming, unlike other Fanfic MC's beatings, that are quite humiliating for no reason.

abcfucku
abcfuckuLv1abcfucku

update the aokiji fanfic plsssss