Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Template System

Bro this makes absolutely no sense bruh just runied all this buildup did you really do all of this just to have him join the akatsuki?

and... what happens with kurenai and shizune ? are they supposed to live 10 years thinking he's dead (cause i think you'll make him come back at the beginning of the plot) and then boom they cry and fall in love once again. weird

friend why ?? because I don't blame danzo and the others?

I don't understand why do all this, it's just for the sake of plot and I really don't like how things are going, I will stick around a little long to see how it ends up but man this is disappointing.

..........I still don't get it

there's no point in this step. I get he wants to look for the mystery character but Minato would have easily offered a leave of absence to do so but to fake his own death and act like the killer no one will trust him when he comes back. not to mention when he does come back he will be a Rouge nin. plus anyone with common sense will question his motives behind all this so he lost his home then add in the fact that kurenai will never forgive this making her think he died. unless you decide to make her like every woman in Xian stories which you have said time and time again your trying to avoid. I just don't see the point.

ever since MC lost an arm I've already had my doubts with continuing but author asked to stay until chapter 87 for everything to make sense. But now, everything makes no sense whatsoever. he lost his arm and the actual people responsible aren't even revealed to Minato and the rest. I appreciate all the effort you've put into this and it's been a fun read but I'll be dropping this.

so........ nobody gonna talk about Danzo🤣

well thanks for the chapter author san and well the journey till here wasn't without some upside's-down's but I enjoyed it but now this chapter pushed me to the point that I couldn't read it further. I wish you luck in your future endeavors author san.

Telling everybody that Konoha's former Hokage and elder conspired to kill their hero would pretty much guarantee loss of confidence in Konoha. Can even restart war. I think atleast can be the reason @author tried this development

author said wait till 87 I still don't understand anything it was going fine so far then you dropped this bomb and i thought maybe there was reason but this does not make sense anymore why blame his alias akagami shanks why leave kurenai and shizune without informing them why does he have to dissapear if want prosperity of konoha he should have trained some more students then let them teach upcoming generations if you want to enter akatsuki you should have just inform Minato rather than dropping a bomb on everyone

Faking death? I understand. Not revealing danzo and sarutobi as the culprit? 🤔 At least I can try to reason this one. but making himself as the killer? (I'm assuming he will now take Shanks' name) I don't know man...

why??

Oh boy this novel is just skyrocketing ... but backwards srsl this novel goes from ok'ish novel that i can kill some time reading to just something that is just stupid >_> you said wait till chapter 87 ... and i readed 87 chapter and only thing i feel is that this story is going down hill

I will stay for one more chapter, but if he really, even trite, does not warn Shizune and Kurenai that he is alive. Sorry, but I think in that case you have pulled all your efforts on this fanfiction down the toilet in a similar twist.

For my part, one of the worst ways to strengthen someone. They can quickly gain power from becoming hateful people, they will live only to get revenge, and they will stop living their own lives for it. They become the shadow of who they were originally.

well I will just read this but for formality sakes it was like one of my favourite now It has just other disposable ff

Que rabia, esperaba que al menos miraran la memoria de los cadáveres y se expusieran las verdaderas caras de ese grupo de ancianos obsesionados con el poder y mejor aún sería que todo el mundo los despreciaran y fueran la vergüenza del mundo shinobi, incluso si están muertos sus clanes e influencias deberían caer con ellos

Cant lie everything was good about this fanfic untill this chapter it was stupid to blame himself

why did he take the blame? won't showing the real attempted killers open the eyes of the people and allow them to search more into the history of the crime of both hiruzen and Danzo? if he wanted to just disappear, why did he have to make himself a villain with no apparent reason? and eventually, when someone meets him won't they recognize him by his voice or his chakra signature?. or does the mc want to venture into the sage forest and do something or does he want to engage in the civil wars? but I don't get it, I really hope this doesn't mess up the story 🙏