Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Template System
Naruto: The Template System
Navy_King
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Dude you have absolutely not grasped the character of Orochimaru and sarutobi. Orochimaru never wanted to be a hokage, his only goal is immortality and getting this position would have hindered him. Hiruzen didn't exterminate the senju clan, it's the 2nd hokage who diluted his clan in konoha to increase the strength of the village and weaken the control of the clans on the ninja council. That's why he put the Uchiwa outside the village. Hiruzen is like the king Cobra in one piece in the sense that he let himself be carried by the events and doesn't really act
Hiruzen didn't love the Hokage seat that much. Only reason he didn't support Orochimaru was because he was becoming more and more heartless by each passing experiment. Hiruzen knew Orochimaru will always place his needs ahead of village and even might cause Konoha's destruction. Orochimaru himself wasn't all that interested in becoming Hokage cause he saw the position as a burden and shackle.
the problem i currently had with this fanfic is that all character is different on how they should be... if you put another name on them i wouldnt know the different! they act totally like they are chinese and not Japanese i understand that it difficult to completely understand a different culture, however i don't even see an effort in understanding it. you just took an anime and adapted it to chinese culture and they dont fit, it like you take a care then slaping part that was mean to be on a bike to it.
