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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Template System

Frizent
FrizentLv1Frizent

Amigo, Aizen tenía un firme motivo para ocultar su fuerza, además de que eso era un paso necesario para cumplir con su gran plan, que si no es por el guión llamado Ichigo, lo cumple, en cambio tu MC solo esconde su fuerza por motivos más pequeños y como está ahora no es necesario, no creo que sea justo compararlos, por otro lado, el punto principal del problema con la historia es la vaga noción de fuerza, no nos dejas claro que tan fuerte es, o por lo menos una comparación del shanks a maximo poder con una potencia como Naruto modo rikudo + modo sabio, y desde allí marcar una clara línea de poder, si sigues así, todo lo demás parece conveniente y a veces parece idiota, usando más poder del necesario para acabar con frituras

Sissine
SissineLv4Sissine

Please, don't make kozuki and Kakashi fight so long. That would be ridiculous. Just end it fast

BayMax
BayMaxLv4BayMax

I want to ask if mc will lose his arm in the kyubi attack or stay intact?.by the way thanks for the chapter

LUZIR
LUZIRLv3LUZIR

I feel Bad for shizune

Spankdady
SpankdadyLv3Spankdady

Also the MC should definitely develop a good relationship with Minato and Jiraiya, Minato will definitely be Future Hokage and MC should definitely join his Anbu when he takes over as Hokage and help Minato build his team and gaining support from people in village and also save Minato from dying during 9 tails incident and MC strength should be at peak Kage class or Super Kage class before the Nine tails incident

whitethief274
whitethief274Lv5whitethief274

no bro you are doing your writing properly I don't have any complaints so keep it up and you are right about mc hiding his strength there will always be people complaining about small matters so don't care and keep writng

king_Gurra10
king_Gurra10Lv13king_Gurra10

nice i love the love interest and I'm glad this isn't harem.

Santos2724
Santos2724Lv14Santos2724

Im find if it is only 1 girl or more but If you can and want to put shizune in to I mean i get why most want harem. Only from that generation of konoha we have: Kurenai Shizune Anko yugao uzuki

Spankdady
SpankdadyLv3Spankdady

I’m curious about MC strength now He should be around half step Kage lvl or lower Kage lvl but still in the end the MC has strength to defend himself and he can definitely run away if things go south between him and third Hokage

ManGanu
ManGanuLv5ManGanu

For me nice so far but why Kakashi still in Chunin exam this time because Kakashi already Chunin but he still can in team 7. That only werid thing so far

Alpha_Ace
Alpha_AceLv4Alpha_Ace

Exp

Tom_tucker2
Tom_tucker2Lv3Tom_tucker2

I just want his next template to be a sword user like kisuke urahara from bleach

Haku_Ouroboros
Haku_OuroborosLv4Haku_Ouroboros

Prefiero a shizune

Vincent_Latta
Vincent_LattaLv4Vincent_Latta

I don't want kozuki to reveal his strength so early he's only 9 he should wait till at least 15 your keeping a good pace with things and I live the novel so far keep doing your thing bro

Kunutunukeks
KunutunukeksLv1Kunutunukeks

let him explore the 8 gates of heaven, his body is right in perfect alignment with this technique (it will be like passing luffy)

Spankdady
SpankdadyLv3Spankdady

So basically Kurenia is basically the love interests which I’m ok with

DaoistdL1vIc
DaoistdL1vIcLv12DaoistdL1vIc

It's fine

KingKarma_1766
KingKarma_1766Lv4KingKarma_1766

I think you made him way too op...

Doebermeister
DoebermeisterLv1Doebermeister

I can't believe author is not Chinese lol

TheLittleGirl
TheLittleGirlLv13TheLittleGirl

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.