Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: The Template System

A few things: 1. I find the writing and interaction very simple minded. I can't explain it well. 2. System novel. Chapter 5 and we saw the system once, I imagine its one of the "System Novels" when the system is forgotten? I mean, we didn't even get proper explanation on the system, the level of power do not seem to have been thought out: 10% of Shank, what does that mean, power? because thats impossible or he would be far more powerful. He got observation Haki.... did he get it at 100% of Shanks? which would make him powerful, does he need to train it from nothing? which seems weird since he didn't start yet. Other than that one mention in the system status it didn't come up at all in the novel.

Sarutobi is making me think of FF Dumbledore. But this is for the greater good, after all.

Soooo he attacked Kakashi without giving him any time to react but waited for the whatever mc to play a nurse with his back to the enemy and didn’t attack him? Where’s the consistency of action?

Wow I really though to highly of this fanfic, I said 2 chapters ago that I would probably drop this novel at chapter 10, because of the flaws that this fanfic posses, just this chapter proves the point that this fanfic it's really flawed, Konoha has a clan that is specialized in dogs, how the Anbu didn't use the dogs to localize Kakashi and Kozuki it's one of the biggest plot holes that I ever saw. For people that are reading in this chapter I give from chapter 1 to 5 a score of 6/10, I will not grade the novel in the comments anymore because I will be dropping, good luck for the author going forward and thanks for the chapters that I read! PS: Before writing a fanfic you need a really good understand (or passable at best) of the source, so my advice for the author is that he need to understand the Naruto world a bit better.

Imagined the MC cutting Madara's huge meteorite!😍

This chapter obviously has some issues, but it was enjoyable overall.

Exp

Why is MC hiding his strength so much, its not naruto era, kakashi managed to ace everything and be fine from root,

how is this number1 in the animeff section...

thanks for the chapter.

Yup definitely Chinese. I don't think Kakashi's character would act like that.

Valla, comenzó a caer, que tan rápido lo hará a partir de ahora, solo el autor lo dirá.

Tiene 5 años y mato a un chunin si claro muy roto el mc

Reading

I thank you for the chapter.

its know not knew

Thanks

You keep using "knew" instead of "know" in some of your sentences.

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️