HolyOniiSama
he 's only good at taijutsu , I don't see why he should strive to be a ninja when all it will do is restrict him to serving as a ninja for people who don't even care about him , it would be better if he uses modern basic knowledge to create a business and expand from there while training in your spare time.
Until now I have two comments on your novel, the first is the time of Kushina's advent, it is the end of the second war, and the other thing is about opening the gate of the heart, with all due respect to you, I find the idea illogical because the heart is responsible for vitality and pumps blood. If he uses the original technique, when he opens the first gate or another, vitality will decrease and the body will be exhausted, but it will return to normal later thanks to the heart that pumps vitality. But if you So far I have two observations on your novel. The first time of Kushina's arrival is the end of the second war, and the other thing is about opening the gate of the heart. With all due respect to you, I find the idea illogical because the heart is responsible for vitality and pumps blood. If it uses the original technique, when it opens the first gate or another, vitality will decrease, and the body will be exhausted, but it will return to normal later thanks to the heart that pumps vitality. But if you reverse So far I have two observations on your novel. The first is the time of Kushina's advent, it is the end of the second war, and the other thing is about opening the gate of the heart. With all due respect to you, I find the idea illogical because the heart is responsible for vitality and pumps blood. If it uses the original technique, when it opens the first gate or otherwise, vitality will decrease and the body will be exhausted, but it will return to normal later thanks to the heart that pumps vitality. But if you reverse this thingSo far I have two comments on your novel. The first time of Kushina's coming is the end of the second war, and the other thing is about opening the gate of the heart. With all due respect to you, I find the idea illogical because the heart is responsible for vitality and pumps blood. If it uses the original technique, when it opens the first gate or otherwise, vitality will decrease, exhausting the body, but it will return to normal later thanks to the heart that pumps vitality. But if you reverse this thing,So far I have two comments on your novel. The first time of Kushina's coming is the end of the second war, and the other thing is about opening the gate of the heart. With all due respect to you, I find the idea illogical because the heart is responsible for vitality and pumps blood. If it uses the original technique, when it opens the first gate or otherwise, vitality will decrease, exhausting the body, but it will return to normal later thanks to the heart that pumps vitality. But if you reverse this thing, So far I have two observations on your novel. The first is the time of Kushina's coming, it is the end of the second war, and the other thing is about opening the gate of the heart. With all due respect to you, I find the idea illogical because the heart is responsible for vitality and pumps blood. If he uses the original technique, when he opens the first gate or another, vitality will decrease, and the body will be exhausted, but it will return to normal later thanks to the heart that pumps vitality. But if you reverse this thing toSo far I have two comments on your novel. The first is the time of Kushina's advent is the end of the second war. The other thing is about opening the gate of the heart. With all due respect to you, I find the idea illogical because the heart is responsible for vitality and pumps blood. If it uses the original technique, when it opens the first gate or another, vitality will decrease, exhausting the body, but it will return to normal later thanks to the heart that pumps vitality. But if you reverse this thing, there is no So far I have two comments on your novel. The first is the time of Kushina's advent is the end of the second war. The other thing is about opening the gate of the heart. With all due respect to you, I find the idea illogical because the heart is responsible for vitality and pumps blood. If it uses the original technique, when it