Trashy fanfic made by trash author

Whats with mc liking freakin apple out of no where .

Mc is dumb as rock and says he is as intelligent as aizen By just having some stupid cheat skill to increase the brain capabilities doesnt mean you are intelligent in sense

The mask thing is cringe

Wow how can mc be this stupid and naive

Trash

What a dumb mc

Pretty dumb for a parnoid person Atleast have some better reason or just say you messed up it happens

Mc is dumb af

Having a system is one of the worst idea one could have it makes all the hard work and training he did a joke Now mc has no skill no talent or creativity just a slave of good old system If he got good devil fruit from roger then it would have been much better and would make sense Well thats my opinion and u can have yours

There is many wizard in africa who use wandless magic mc is nothing special. Why does he want to hide something when he is just slightly better than other classmates .

Bad story writing Mc keep hiding his power No character depth Mc is plain for me Mc is supposed to be an adult but act like 5 yrs old some time which is very annoying Explanation regarding why mc use wandless magic doesnt make any sense to me This novel was waste of time for me May be other would like it but for me it was not so good

Story and the characters in this novel was horrible to me . Character growth of mc is almost zero Mc is too op and story is like rainbow ans sushine when mc could have been killed many times but because of dumb plot nothing happen to them Mc friend and family should have been in more danger and be killed for associating with but just nothing much happens . In my opinion if you want some wholesome novel with mc facing no danger then this novel is for you