LuciferSama
Iām The opposite, I love the fight scenes i come up with but Iām Bad with everything else lol. Your fight scenes are fine theyāre maybe not the best, but itās much better than those novels where the authors like āMC uses his sword and kills twenty people.ā And thatās mainly the most popular novels as well lol.
Author, please if you are going to add romance later or something similar, don't make Kira feel that too since she said she feels the same as Freya, and it would be very uncomfortable to read if she feels the same at those moments since it would be like polyamory and I don't like that, leaving that aside, the rest was incredible