Comments of chapter undefined of King's Awakening

bad start. for some military lord, he sure has a lack of control over his emotions.

I hope at some point, this author learned that punctuation is followed by a space, and that paragraphs, and pauses... exist.

this story kicked off with a bang. I am looking forward to seeing more

World wants know, How can novel of such poor quality gets 1st rank? Are these people blind or do they possess kid's test?

Well... So far so.... Good? I don't know 🤔 the writing doesn't suit my needs but oh well I'll give it a few more chapters

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so he's white mitchell and not bruce white? we got the wrong summary?

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Okay, why is this all one paragraph/ wall of text, with no spaces after full stops?

Worst Writing, Everything is mixed up

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meh kinda lame start overly emotional. he should be very cold and be spewing orders left and right. also I hope he raids that guy that sent him on that mission after he's dont dealing with the family stuff

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the 15 minutes more long of lyge

calm down you are in a horry I can feel it as a reader

I won't comment on the writing, since it's so bad, but where's the spacing, paragraphs, and basic grammar?

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