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It's an eternal adventure I think. If I find a medieval world where science isn't apparent and martial arts are real then I would find it wondrous too.
It's quite an interesting concept, new even. Gojo is an incredible character and since curse and magic are very similar you can make gojo's original curse into original magic which can be named as infinity magic.second thing. Don't make it a harem. In character wise Gojo never had any romantic relationship much less a harem. So if there's a heroine make sure it is one. and also please don't make Erza or Lucy heroine. Cause that will break the canon. Go for characters like mirajane or ultear.Gojo is an enigmatic character that moves like the wind. Please try to maintain that personality. Also your update seems pretty slow. It is the greatest weakness of this story. So please update regularly. And finally, thanks for all of your hard work.
finally a fairy tail fanfiction. btw please don't turn the protagonist into horny dog scumbag. Also if you add romance in it then please make sure it doesn't break the original story. for example, avoid making Lucy or Erza heroin cause they already have love interest in the original story. otherwise it will break reader's immersion. Thank you
this line piece of cake totally kills the mood. A 500 years old cultivator should act like himself. The writer of this novel is a noob for sure.
ok gonna drop this after seeing chosen fruit.
Please make Damien hold 2 fruit powers. However you can make it a long time process. For example, Damian may take a long time to master 2 different fruits and finally revel it during the era of "war of the best". You can use the clone merging to give him this power after a long period of time. Otherwise according to story only black beard masters 2 devil fruits. Which makes him actually better and more unique than the protagonist in a certain way. Personally I think Rumble Rumble fruit goes well with pulverize pulverize fruit. Since the inherent strength of lighting is destruction. Plus with the insane speed of lightining, it will truly make him worthy of the strongest title. Hopefully you will consider my request. Thanks a lot. [img=recommend][img=update]
Conqueror's haki is way more difficult to master and rare than Armament haki. It is through the power of conquorer's haki Roger and shanks dominated the sea. Conquorer haki, when infused with a physical attack can destroy a whole island easily. However very few conquorer's haki holder can infuse it with an attack. You should also know that Hawkeye doesn't have conquorer's haki. Thus he is unable to destroy an island. Kozuki mastered Conqueror to intermidiate while armament only to primary? What's next? Will you reveal that armament haki is stronger than conquorer's haki? Such layman mistakes completely destroys the story. Kindly study the concept of haki on fandom wiki.
Since trashes like trial husband needs to work hard and one birth 2 babies or Other whatever can be translated. Then It's logical that this too should be translated no? After all even if this novel is bad, it is still way better than the trashes usually found on webnovel ranking list.
Is the protagonist of this novel is the same type as that of fang Yun and leylin??? đ§đ§đ§ If so then I am gonna skip this. No matter how good the story is if the protagonist of the story is a scam then it's not my cup of tea. đż