Comments of chapter undefined of Shadow Hunter In Teen Wolf

why create demons?

seriously need to learn where spaces are used near punctuations. such a small thing to learn but would make this a lot better to read

Good start, just a little worried about the demons. Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

ugh... another "meet god, make a wish". sorry, not my cup of tea. good luck

thanks for the really great chapter and keep up with the really great work

Good+

awesome first chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Loved this prologue. so this has a potential for so much more than a simple crossover between Teen Wolf & Shadowhunters and can incorporate TVD-verse & Lucifer-verse (tv series) and the latter can even make DC comics into the fold.... author, you have many options to go from here so even if you make only 4-5 chapters a month, please dont drop this magnificent ff with so much potential... thx

Thxs for the chap

Good premise, but grammar and editing need some work. Especially the grammar. The pace is good, this chapter addresses the standard MC/GOD wish granting so can't judge the world building and storytelling yet, but the premise is quite novel.

They looked like kids to begin with.

I thank you for the chapter.

run your writing through Grammarly. it's free and will help you clean up your writing.

thanks for the chapter

Interesseting

thanks for being sn awesome writer...to know the circle won't be the same as**ole as in the original story right?

u need grammerly