Comments of chapter undefined of Dance of Blood and Steel

Dance of Blood and Steel

adil_6022

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OllieZLv6OllieZ

Uhhhh... I expected more of a fic that only has 5*... But we already got a God that grants wishes and bad grammar, two red flags :( Examples of grammar: "(...) I didn't understand how the time passed" "How! and are you read my mind?!!" I'll keep reading with the hopes of the grammar being improved and because I'm starved of Kingdom Building fics...

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adil_6022Authoradil_6022

No one who wrote reviews ever complained about grammer. So leave a review and people will know grammer is bad. 🤷‍♂️

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dadaoistLv6dadaoist

You nerfed the ennemy instead of having a power up !!!!WTF

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BobainoxLv4Bobainox

Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to this

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0dinsonLv50dinson

Torrhen the redeemer perhaps? 😁

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mugi19Lv14mugi19

Seems ashara isnt there... why would she kill herself if her son is alive?

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NevoNekoLv14NevoNeko

Is this gonna introduce firearms? Hope not, breaks immersion.

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quintusmirusLv4quintusmirus

The MC didn't even have to nerf the Others because he has power... the power of SCIENCE! ;-)

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Zero93Lv6Zero93

Thanks for chapter

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Yesuh_DmzLv2Yesuh_Dmz

The last wish was disapoint, u should gave ay least a power or hability for souvier, really Bad that

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God_Of_LazinessLv3God_Of_Laziness

Thanks

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Travis_BtmbLv13Travis_Btmb

Good chapter I would suggest you add engineering, architecture and advanced martial arts knowledge to your wishes

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Unknown_IDLv2Unknown_ID

Well i was expected ssserum soo

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YGLARTHLv13YGLARTH

se ve interesante

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