Comments of chapter undefined of Avatar: Lion Turtles Champion

Ok first of all, Epic chapter man, so far my favorite seeing the cute attempt of azula to seduce Orin, also really gald to see mc became not only her first true friend but also her first love I really can see mc is getting so much closer to save her, really glad man, cant wait to see the reaction of zuko, mai and ty lee to azula's crush Keep the good work man 😃

Also please ignore them bro, those peoplw only care about what they want to and cant see beyond the things they dislike of the novel Please keep writing and ignore it, you already established this was an AU universe and i think it was pretty obvius, just seeing the age and the lion turtles, also relax with the grammar thibg, here everyone will critize about this no matter what Keep the awesome job man, love your novel 😄

Thanks for the chapter.

I want MORE

Next chapter i think i am going to include a bunch of dere definitions. Inside the authors thoughts of course mind you. Simply because I know everybody loves a good yandere, but a lot of people do confuse yanderes. Specifically what creates a yandere. So Imma include a small explanation in the author's thought of next chapter. For those who want to read it or not to read it. Hmmm would it be weird to create a dere type chart as a novel? I'll address that too.

Thanks for the chapter!!

this chapter was very good, and the relationship between azula and mc is interesting and cool. go up.

Bro I love this fanfic, thanks for the chapter!

I love this hope they actually figure it out

Well azula is wifey, so it better happen!

I am really enjoying the story so far. Also, don't spend too much time on those reviews, haters are always gonna hate. The story is interesting and the grammar is decent, so don't worry about it.

I read your rant and honestly its stupid how people act on this site. and honestly your grammar isn't even bad so I don't know what he means. And so far I love the story I haven't cringed at all reading this unlike other fanfics where I seemingly cringe so much at certain dialogues or even how they word things. But yeah I took a break from writing a few times because of people like that and I have to get to writing again soon lol

Muchas gracias por actualizar, me encanta este ff y estoy feliz de leerlo de nuevo, sigue asi 👍

good job

thanks for the chapter

You really did an amazing job with the story, I'm so invested that I don't even notice any mistakes, snd even if I look for them it's clear you are improving with each chapter. Really having a blast, tho I do feel bad now for semding a few correction commemts after reading your rant. Hope you are doing ok, and have a good weekend ^^