Comments of chapter undefined of Cheat Awakening ( Rewritten )

If this is rewritten, just how bad was the original

I like your novel but you write what the characters say in quotes like "Ah, boss why are you here, you just have ordered me. I am here to do your work" otherwise, it's very confusing, you understand... I would like it, if you do those changes...

The grammar is pretty bad.

OK, author, do you need an editor? i am one and It's cheap

I think I am out from the first chapter. The grammar just doesn’t flow smoothly and it really feels wrong. Possibly it may improve but I just can’t help feeling off when reading. English is not the authors first language but surely a proofreader could have alleviated a lot of this.

everyone complaining has def never read an MTL translated novel😭

tyftc

thanks for the chapter