Comments of chapter undefined of Sect Leader's Rise to the top!

Hello, you've got potential here! And the grammar is better than most out there (though you should be careful not to put "?" in the middle of your sentences 😉) Best of luck, let's see where this goes! 💪

nice chapter

Thanks for the chap

These I was bought?, ... are really annoying, I don't know if it is the right grammar but a ? in the middle of a sentence is wierd

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

is there a bit of romance for spices only here?

turn to dark mode to see author name. also this is lovely. [img=recommend]

It should be ‘Some grammar HAS been corrected’ which means you have more work to do....