Snollygoster
author san , its just my opinion but i dont like when mc has to choose the partner from all the other potential romantic interest ,and i would not have cared if i had not liked the characters but u author had made all the potential love interest good even if they annoying initially ,(experience from your previous novel) and i come to dilemma between who to choose between Rose ,Martina and Daphne becoz i know at the end of novel u will make them all loveable , so plzzz make it so we had a satisfying ending . At the end it is author decision and u know more about writing than me, and its just my rant for personal satisfaction
FINALLY!!!, God, I thought it would never be cured. I honestly thought the author would make it longer, but it's a good thing he didn't. don't take it the wrong way, I like it when they give the mcs a blow of realistic reality, forgive the redundancy, but the mc is reality incarnate (sometimes even exaggerated). thanks for a great novel, different and quite risky, the best of luck
The fanfic novel is great, maybe in the future the author could evaluate if Axel could learn Shadowmancy (Reference Raven from the Titans) it should be a power that suits an arcane thief, and a good power for thievery and how to create any shadow is needed a source of light (where there is pure darkness there are no shadows) does not contradict Axel's magical alignment. Another funny idea would be if Axel had to overcome lycanthropy (overcome and not cure, as if Axel developed the true potential of werewolves) mainly due to the fact that the author's first novel the MC hated werewolves...
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