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Comments of chapter undefined of A New Life As Ben 10

Maestro9
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your probably gonna roll your eyes but will there be lemons in this story?

PassiveAtom5140
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Earlier than you'd expect...

Adypoker
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Still think it's sad about the Biological Mother.

FinnsRevenge
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rewritten yet still in a script style? Meh.

Overlord378
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I would suggest taking over the Forever Knights, their ways/morals can be altered later with some cold logic, facts, and overall common sense. Also they're still active, growing in number, and have advanced technology. Just with a medieval theme, and the only big reason they become weak as they are now is because of OG Ben destroying there compounds, soldiers, and operations. Plus if you get into a high enough position to actually do all this, you could possibly get Dr. Animo. Man is a crazy Genius that just wants official recognition, and I mean Genius with a capital G. Dude got part of the Omnitrix (after Ben was messing with it) and turned it into a transformation ray, with normal human tech. Not advanced alien tech that makes what we consider advanced look like toaster level tech to them, NORMAL human tech. Imagine what he could do if it was actually properly funded, and with a goal in mind instead of just fiddling around with whatever he could scrap up. Also remember, he is an expert when it comes to changing DNA. Man turned normal animals into monsters, that can quite literally wreck buildings. Now if he focused on making super soldiers out of/for the Forever Knights under Ben's leadership/control... oh my.

Obsidians_smoke
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Obrigado pelo capítulo

Chronosign
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Would've gone with Sheila, Red VS Blue reference.

Chronosign
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Human form but without the scars and with red eyes after puberty.

Chronosign
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I think Kirby was meant as a reference to Jack Kirby, the creator of DC Comics. Also, Anodite form:

RogueCrescent
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Kurumi21
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Thanks for the chapter! 😁👍

ABSenior
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well novel is good 👍

Winter_slayer
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Finalmente uma FF de Ben 10 que tem vale a pena ler

WolfLord
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Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Natanael486
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Thanks for the chapter

BoboPingu
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Great chapter