Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter : Arc of Embodiment ( Rewrite )

don't need Marvel it will just kill this story

yes harry potter ends 1997 the wonder begins 2004. already chose a heroine? to join a wonder with HP the protagonist is 4 years older than the Black Widow

no too much will just dilute the story. maybe later on in the story he discovered he is in the marvel universe

Why does it seem that very few can survive without a crossover?

Yes please And he can just create a vial filled with water from fountain of youth from the 7 deadly sins

author when you,have time to take a look at youtube "Every time merlin speaks the dragon language" honestly is very cool 🤔 is there a sleeping dragon in the lands where hogwarts is? after all the school's motto is, Never poke a sleeping dragon and you've turned Pendragon's home hogwarts it would be interesting for the MC to speak in the language of dragons and this supposed dragon came to welcome you when the MC is wearing the sorting hat.

no marvel, and please don't add things like new type of magic or ancient evil character it spoils the fun..messing with characters is fine tho and a bit of plot twists but not too much..am rooting for author, so far so good..keep it up

ok i was willing to forget and forgive the bloodline thing as many authors do this mistake but in this chapter the author has gone overboard. Of course King Arthur Pendragon owned the lands, he was the King for god's sake. but giving mc everything he owned back in the day is just stupid. for all we know now mc can ask everyone to vacate hogwarts just because he owns the land where the castle was built and everyone is just trespassing in his property. THIS STORY IS RIDICULOUS

don't listen to haters, just go with your story and be you.

After the hp cannon make him able to travel to different multiverses if you want to......if not then keep it hp

Great chapter

no harem? fine I can deal with that only if we get with Hermione

No. It will kill the story

Ahh... Suckers to Potter and longbottom ehh.... 😂 😂 😂

plz do not add marvel plz

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