Lord_Leylin
Write something short, it would be nice to see some development. This is an interesting story... will there be romance or something like that? Will this Leylin be similar to the cannon version or will you do something like Keetarp and work a bit with his personality in certain regards? Personally, I have found Keetarp's version of Leylin far more enjyoable.
He will be different from the cannon as he does not have the drive for immortality like the original. He will also not be toi much like Keetarps Leylin but I have only read up till him becoming a magus in Keetarps ff so I can't say. I am trying to keep the story style to be similar to the original with the main focus being on Leylin and how he will affect those around him.