And who are you, the proud Lord said

He's the family head

Huh, mathematically correct use of parentheses.

I only needed to read the word warlock and I was on board. The story seems interesting but some more detail could be put on Issie's character. It may be because he seems weak but he seems quite ooc for me. But maybe it's just the fact that this leylin has not experienced the magus world. Hope to see some great keikaku from Leylin and all the best.

How about a celestial/star dragon fruit itself, can have powers of stars and what not along with reflecting his background. This would allow fast travel through air and you can probably do some black hole shenanigans after awakening, along with gravity though the constraint would be he will only be able to attract thing to himself or on set point he could place like a singularity from Mass Effect.

Quite a similar start however things will change very soon.

Sorry about that I just type the chapter at once so I sometime type Lelouch instead of Leylin.

There is one instance that has stuck with me in the book. He stated how everything he does he has a purpose. When he spends time with his family he knows how happy he would be and if he spent researching he knows that too. That way he does what he feels would bring him the most returns.

Much smarter, he starts as a mediocre person but rises all thanks to his mind and ai chip. I would say is the archetypical cold detached antagonist who cares only about his goals and what would help him achieve it.

I will try to, I want to explore Leylin himself as a character. My name is reason enough. So if I write after this Leylin will probably still be an mc but probably in a different world

He will be different from the cannon as he does not have the drive for immortality like the original. He will also not be toi much like Keetarps Leylin but I have only read up till him becoming a magus in Keetarps ff so I can't say. I am trying to keep the story style to be similar to the original with the main focus being on Leylin and how he will affect those around him.

Same with me I've only ever found one womw fanfic and it was set in the same universe. I feel Leylin is the best part of the novel and can do so much more. That's why I wrote this to explore what Leylin can do

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Hello readers, Author here just giving my own creation a 5 star cus if there is one thing one must do it is to give themselves too much credit. Now there are a few more characters I have to write so here they are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 are are are are are area 11 ara ara

I've never seen such an even split it's 59-59 rn. Idc about what happenes, the story is nice and as long as it keeps progressing it's fine.

yup

His charming personality

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Haven't read it yet but this is the first warlock of the magus world fanfic I've seen, hence this deserves all 5, 5 stars. Here's to a great fanfic.