Author-san, the pacing of the story is too slow.. It has been 20 chapters since Yohan left the lin clan to visit Evelyn and find a weapon.. You could have written everything in 3 chapters max.. -.-
It's good but the bad thing you blocked it on the computer you can't keep reading going that's the bad but the rest this vien checks out the lemon part it shows that you are almost new I know you have experience