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Comments of chapter undefined of Tyranny of Steel

Zerothepowerofdark
ZerothepowerofdarkLv2Zerothepowerofdark

Dissapointing

MisterImmortal
MisterImmortalLv14MisterImmortal

I thought he had learnt his lessons. His brother called the church on him man. That's as good as getting IRS on your back. Not killing him is a completely foolish thing. And as an ex-soldier, I expected better from him. Create more and better enemies for him man, stop with this scheming little brother. I love this story but this one aspect is frustrating.

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Adam_Noukasd
Adam_NoukasdLv1Adam_Noukasd

A little more rushed than I would have thought but it's good that sometimes not everything goes according to the MC's plans and seeing his brother maybe come for revenge later will be interesting

Yatendouij
YatendouijLv4Yatendouij

sparing an enemy's life is no different from being cruel to yourself. for someone who has a desire to be an emperor has a very weak will it is pathetic.

Mark_Brown_2427
Mark_Brown_2427Lv1Mark_Brown_2427

He would arrange an accident. Lambert is reaching the point of having plot armor. Even Joffrey from Asoiaf was only able get away with so much before Martin couldn't justify his continued existence, and killed him.

Forst_Lost
Forst_LostLv13Forst_Lost

Honestly, just one step closer to dropping the novel. I have recently read two novels that insist on a pointless and never ending battle between two brothers for the sake of 'plot and future development' but its just annoying. The fact that this f*king idiot is somehow still part of the novel amazes me because he apparently has more plot armor than the MC. Just not entertaining.

OllieZ
OllieZLv6OllieZ

Dissapointing,

Jon_Laed
Jon_LaedLv4Jon_Laed

That woman is biased

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Xboxgorgo18
Xboxgorgo18Lv7Xboxgorgo18

Such a shame this novel doesn't get much attention

Muspon
MusponLv13Muspon

that was a bit anti climaxtic

Arkage
ArkageLv15Arkage

Arg.... the chapters..... so short...... unsatisfactory....

Leandro_Sepulveda_2456
Leandro_Sepulveda_2456Lv1Leandro_Sepulveda_2456

Why the mc doesn't poisoned to His brother?

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RandomDudeTbh
RandomDudeTbhLv3RandomDudeTbh

Thanks for the chapter!

SeductiveWildPussy
SeductiveWildPussyLv3SeductiveWildPussy

I'm completely disappointed if the MC doesn't kill your idiot little brother.

baniel_stone
baniel_stoneLv4baniel_stone

I kind of want his brother have a good Redemption Arc I don't know why though

icyicewolf
icyicewolfLv6icyicewolf

book pretty good, also

Sami_KS
Sami_KSLv3Sami_KS

good chapter

Time_Zekrom_4361
Time_Zekrom_4361Lv11Time_Zekrom_4361

Thanks for the chapter!!!

JYGT
JYGTLv6JYGT

This part of Linde's confession is the stupidest thing I have read so far. Why she would do it in front of two men who are not even part of the family, on the contrary, they should only know the minimum necessary, another unnecessary mistake by the author.

Warsheft
WarsheftLv2Warsheft

well that was unwise milord.

BobbyCSB
BobbyCSBLv13BobbyCSB

I myself am enjoying how this story goes. Author should stick to his story ideas and only take constructive criticism in the form of writing structure and grammar. It is the wordsmith's tale he is spinning, not ours. We the readers may only react and not attempt to muddy the story with our hands.