Zentmeister
These end of chapter musings. I see this in novels all the time. Where an author leaves their notes in but tries sell it like a cliffhanger from Rocky and Bullwinkle. The difference between these spoilers and Rocky and Bullwinkle are that most novels forget all of these promises. Even though the narrator spoiled the future, I have heavy doubts.
ok so basically this is a wish fullfilment story... or at least in the romance department i guess... honestly, very disappointed. i dont hate that the girl fall for the MC or that this will be a harem. what i really hate is the sudden out of character of MC and also the ridiculous way, the MC subdue the girl... like come on man, im sure you can find a better way to make things flow better. like this is such a forceful plot...
But like why tho??? Did you really need her just for your brother? You should know of way more advanced poisons or ways of creating âaccidentsâ. I mean if he doesnât want to kill I guess this is a good route, just seems way over the top. And just after a week her personality does a 180? At least have it take longer, thatâs faster than this story took to do a 180.
Ok i was really liking the story and i was planning on looking over the whole sleeping with brothers girl when he already has someone of his own ⊠Because I see what he is actually trying to do âŠwhich is build his reputation as well but reading this scene made me go check the tags and it is my bad âŠ..I did not see the harem tag so itâs my fault⊠For those of you bashing the author just because of the scene knowing that there is a harem tag shame shame shame unfortunately harem tag is just that thereâs not going to be a one on one romance per se or as least is not guaranteed