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Comments of chapter undefined of Tyranny of Steel

Atomsphere
AtomsphereLv1Atomsphere

These end of chapter musings. I see this in novels all the time. Where an author leaves their notes in but tries sell it like a cliffhanger from Rocky and Bullwinkle. The difference between these spoilers and Rocky and Bullwinkle are that most novels forget all of these promises. Even though the narrator spoiled the future, I have heavy doubts.

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CallMePlez
CallMePlezLv1CallMePlez

Berengar is slowly becoming one based chad

Afakasi
AfakasiLv14Afakasi

Aye man, I like stories for their uniqueness. And this story got one 😂😂 my mans is goated

Kai_levart
Kai_levartLv15Kai_levart

This is probably your most controversial move, author-san. It's interesting but some people my drop this story.

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twalls
twallsLv14twalls

Loving this story

Arkage
ArkageLv15Arkage

I love it. I may be a bit messed in the head but hey to each their own. Keep up the great work Mr.Author!

TheUnsuspicious
TheUnsuspiciousLv3TheUnsuspicious

ok so basically this is a wish fullfilment story... or at least in the romance department i guess... honestly, very disappointed. i dont hate that the girl fall for the MC or that this will be a harem. what i really hate is the sudden out of character of MC and also the ridiculous way, the MC subdue the girl... like come on man, im sure you can find a better way to make things flow better. like this is such a forceful plot...

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Zero0
Zero0Lv6Zero0

goooooooooodddddddd work author great novel

Lestda
LestdaLv15Lestda

😔 this novel really go from hype to chinese smoke...

Eunus
EunusLv5Eunus

Is Linde the other girl in the cover?

Ali_AOM
Ali_AOMLv1Ali_AOM

For heaven's sake, you are a great man

ritmmrngthm
ritmmrngthmLv3ritmmrngthm

this feels like a xianxia novel where girls fall in love with mc just after 1 chapter of interaction and where r*pe victims become his lover bs

Watari
WatariLv5Watari

hmmmmm, I have quite a mixed feelings about the introduction of cannon the early on.

chance_isaac
chance_isaacLv14chance_isaac

But like why tho??? Did you really need her just for your brother? You should know of way more advanced poisons or ways of creating “accidents”. I mean if he doesn’t want to kill I guess this is a good route, just seems way over the top. And just after a week her personality does a 180? At least have it take longer, that’s faster than this story took to do a 180.

SwiftFate
SwiftFateLv13SwiftFate

And that's me out. What a pathetic attempt at writing this kind of stuff. Wish fulfillment is fine, but at least do it well. Jeez.

Pedro_Vitor_4966
Pedro_Vitor_4966Lv1Pedro_Vitor_4966

Ok, she will be just a concubine

Mild_Depression
Mild_DepressionLv4Mild_Depression

skipping all this sexual nonsense. Jesus 50 shades of Grey is better .

Jonna9799
Jonna9799Lv13Jonna9799

Ok i was really liking the story and i was planning on looking over the whole sleeping with brothers girl when he already has someone of his own 
 Because I see what he is actually trying to do 
which is build his reputation as well but reading this scene made me go check the tags and it is my bad 
..I did not see the harem tag so it’s my fault
 For those of you bashing the author just because of the scene knowing that there is a harem tag shame shame shame unfortunately harem tag is just that there’s not going to be a one on one romance per se or as least is not guaranteed

Uncle_Sheogorath
Uncle_SheogorathLv4Uncle_Sheogorath

she submitted to his way too quickly. Almost like she was brainwashed with magic or something.

ImKing
ImKingLv6ImKing

thx for the chapterđŸ˜»

AbysallNight
AbysallNightLv14AbysallNight

Keep up the good work!