Comments of chapter undefined of Ultimate Earthbender (Dropped)

even though i am disappointed about the schedule it's been a tough year and honestly we have all got to take care of ourselves more so go for it

Take care of yourself, it's important. Thanks for the chapter and update I was worried you dropped. cheers for a healthier you!

Eh, felt like that fight was just 'plot-no-jutsu'. Making him lose because the author though it was needed. Even though it would have been better to have him win even if it was a tough win. I don't understand why all authors feel the need to have their MCs lose so many fights, like it is necessary to lose to build character. Tell that to Lelouch, Kenshin, or Yusuke who basically won every fight minus one or two, and just barely.

lol he didn't got killed because azula is in hurry if not he is gonna die and his respond is just like that ? if not for being mc he is gonna die there !

i prefer mc to stay away from avatar thou, make his own journey

From the way his attitude is about this, he really deserve to have another scene that will really wake him up like Toph getting seriously injured because of his carelessness and arrogance even if the readers hate for that to happen. He still thinks that this is the show he saw in his other life rather than reality and that kind of MC is one that would die immediately if not for plot armor.

even though I really like this story & want to see what happens next, I get wanting to improve yourself first before doing other things, so it's fine as long as you still work on this story every once in a wighl.

Thanks for the chapter. For your fight scenes, I suggest you cut back a little on the details as it will make a fight seem a lot slower and less intense then it really is. There is a video on fight scenes by Writing with Jenna Moreci on youtube, that's where I learned how to write them, so you should try that out, its about ten minutes. I also find that the scenes are better if I write them while listening to action music, so you could try that to if you want. Since this is an Avatar fanfic, maybe listen to a remix of the avatar theme.

You definitely have to take care of yourself first and foremost, thanks for the chapter.

i love this

But this fanfic is in my opinion expertly done .-.

My guy. Absolute props to you for focusing on your health. Were happy if your happy, so dont give up the health improvement grind. im a little bummed about the less chapters, but ya cant blame me, It’s a great fic. Even more so because there is a real dirth of Avatar The Last Airbender fics in general. I wish you the beat of luck in acheiving your goals, I’m looking forward to more of the story, no matter when you update!

Tank yu for the chapter. Always a pleasure reading this.

thanks for the chapter

Just caught up binge reading thanks for the chapters 🙏

Make resistance training the major part in weight loss. It's key for a healthier transformation in weight.

Just to let you know, I really love this story. I understand that life changes, however I hope you will continue this story. I'm going to medical school, this is a great destressing tool for me. Looking forward to the next up date. And remember weight loss is 80 diet!

Thanks for the chapter