Amirz1161
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water cause uzushiogakure basically pool so water makes sense.
his name suck if combine with japanese clan name. zoro is western and you want to add japanese family name make it worse even there is name that suitable if combine but zoro sucks. i actually prefer name shimotsuki zoro.
we got a problem author, you and me only. first of all why zoro, you can take other name like shinjiro or issei, masahiro. zoro uzumaki seems like bad and give me gooosebump.
who actually purple lady
also yuuto defeated was early than the cannon event. i hope you can fix this.
author rewrite all of it if you want to rewrite the hinagiku event.
no author just continue the start from hinatsuki tragedy, also the only thing that you need to change is some plot after the hinatsuki tragedy like when mc and seigen success on capture yuuto.
yay that's boboiboy thunderstorm ia do powerful but he cant defeat vargoba and retakka with it cause in series it says that thunderstorm are weak.
basically, this is some kind similar to Kage no Jitsuryokusha, author you didn't plagiarism right.