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Comments of chapter undefined of Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Sin_Kinghad
Sin_KinghadLv11Sin_Kinghad

thanks for the chapter

Paulo_D_Manoel
Paulo_D_ManoelLv11Paulo_D_Manoel

to me you should explore the naruto universe more in depth, and if you want to return to the empire because of the war you can say that the time dilation is different on this particular universe or something.

The_OneTrueGod
The_OneTrueGodLv4The_OneTrueGod

This world does have a lot of potential. Next world should be like danmachi or whatever it’s called. There are many gods divinities to study. And the power system could help the empire. It would increase peoples stats from “Xp” by fighting which also would increase peoples motivation to fight in the war

Grenhaer
GrenhaerLv4Grenhaer

In the world of Naruto, you can spend time interestingly and usefully for the empire (even as an op, I hope you will not weaken it for each new world ... because this is an opportunity to show your writing skills ... + nerfing the character is disgusting, and also proof poor writing skills... or his lack of confidence in writing). After all, writing a long and interesting book with op mc is much more difficult than usual. And the reception with a nerf for the sake of the plot is poor + quickly gets bored. I think you have enough skills to write interestingly without any nerfs in new worlds (even in very weak ones. because you need not only: battles, dangers, etc...)

Fox_king_1789
Fox_king_1789Lv4Fox_king_1789

Make it very long and detailed because its very expanded universe don't have opinion on sharingan but at least study and replicate its ability if not taking sharingan or directly have rinnegan

Onlythree
OnlythreeLv14Onlythree

Make it longer

asdasdssf
asdasdssfLv1asdasdssf

Totally support going bit longer in Naruto world :)

zylon_04
zylon_04Lv14zylon_04

can you make an ark in a sci-fy universe

EmaCnDf
EmaCnDfLv4EmaCnDf

I love naruto world bro, i think you could develop a lot in there, what its your next world? i hope you go where you could develop your empire more, i mean marvel and dc universes, star wars universes in diferent eras etc.

LazyMartialSage
LazyMartialSageLv4LazyMartialSage

shouldn't be too long and pleas make sure you don't have the mc have a sharingan

Chaosking24
Chaosking24Lv5Chaosking24

Naruto have alot of potential if you look clsely ist almost a cultivation world if not the limit of chakra

Negan_5785
Negan_5785Lv1Negan_5785

Yes, Naruto world is interesting, just dont make it like in Black Clover (creating new continents and dimensions)

GavinTheGrape
GavinTheGrapeLv15GavinTheGrape

if you had a different individual that got sent from primordial earth to provide conflict & new resources.

Henry_0705
Henry_0705Lv4Henry_0705

Shouldn't be short but please don't give the MC sharigan

TrueMenace
TrueMenaceLv13TrueMenace

Should at least be 5 chaps in my opinion makes the story more interesting

Nemesis_of_Suicide
Nemesis_of_SuicideLv5Nemesis_of_Suicide

Everything is good and all but his Empire needs his support and he promised to only be away for a short time.

LTG
LTGLv15LTG

Personally i just find his discoveries interesting and i can see that some of the things in this world would be useful for him so i would not mind a longer arc

kennedycosta
kennedycostaLv3kennedycosta

Acho que você deveria explorar mais o universo de Naruto e no final fazer tsunade uma das imperatriz e fundir as nações elementares com o mundo principal.

Samuel_Bodurri
Samuel_BodurriLv4Samuel_Bodurri

will Edward go to the immage comics verse? I mean there he can study the viltrumite for their almost reactiv adaptation,and he can aquair luther strode herculean training method so he can train in harmony and combine his body,mind and soul,and even if the power it garants isn't much he can alwys improve it,I mean the training method givs him auto bio manipulation and more,and in the innvincible verse there is also a guy that can travel the multiverse and i don't mean paralel ons,because in one issue he brought Mark to Marvel where he meet spiderman and fought otto togheter.

Miguel_Goenaga
Miguel_GoenagaLv13Miguel_Goenaga

Thanks for the chapter

Acaro_venduto
Acaro_vendutoLv4Acaro_venduto

thank you author-sama for the chapter