Comments of chapter undefined of Back For My Daughter

great start thou u could have made him heavenly god emperor or such, venerable rank seems a bit low

"the thing that are bound to happen will happen. no matter what path we take.." aww..this one is sooooo true..

Grammar could use some work. It could easily be fixed with a extension like grammarly.

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thanks for the hard work dear author..

You are at the stage with your grammar where you can write with all the proper tenses, but occasionally you don't place a word in correctly, miss a coma or leave out words that would make more sense in the context of the sentence structure, but I can still understand your writing with relative ease. That is an amazing achievement, and you are so close to having perfect English grammar! Keep at it! If you want me to proofread and show you all the improvements you can make grammatically in this chapter, just leave me a reply! Loving the story so far~~ Time to continue reading.

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grammar could be better but miles above many others. the conversations feels a bit stiff or stilted not a natural one.keep up the good work

start is cool and unique [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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thanks for the chapter

I like the fact that he didn’t die during the tribulation or get betrayed

author one question which type of Harem is this like mc end with single heroine or multiple heroine tell me?

Thx

The chinese novels are good but the thing thats hard to deal with is the confusing names. My brain apparently couldlnt handle it. Thats why I get lost in the story. Does anyone here have generous enough to help this poor troubled soul? Like a tip or whatever?

I'm hyped

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Thanks for the chapter