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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Posted

    Not sure what to say here but keep in mind 24/25 of the reviews are just spam of random characters and emotes instead of actual reviews.. Take what you will from that but it certainly doesn't give me a good impression of the author for not deleting bs reviews like that.

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    A Goddess' Wish (Dropped)
    Anime & Comics · Xeranas
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Replied to deletedaccount_

    you are going around spamming your own book so people will read it.. No offense but instead of getting you readers it's just gonna make people less inclined to read it.

    altalt
    Era of Castles: Starting with 99 Dragon Eggs
    Fantasy · Golden Disc
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Replied to N0xiety

    Reading how the author keeps backpedalling here tells you the quality of the writing.. What a mess lol.

    altalt
    Out of Space
    Sci-fi · Neobear
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Commented

    Honestly im bored already. The author focuses on how dumb and incompetent the mc looks too often and its already annoying.

    Ch 8 Training Begins
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    Invincible Uncle-Grandmaster
    Games · Nine Cuts
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Commented

    okay but why?

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    altalt
    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Commented

    I already see one glaring problem here.. if one goes into there and kills the demon god wouldn't it already mean the person is just as strong and just as much of a threat :/ are they gonna end up getting rid of the mc when he is done too?

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    altalt
    Hero of Darkness
    Fantasy · CrimsonWolfAuthor
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Replied to Demon_God_Azzul

    jojo's bizarre adventure season 2 i believe

    But it wasn't actually his fault since in his perspective he woke up only when Rick was about to force himself on Dina. Before that he felt as if his consciousness was floating in nothingness. However, the part where he tore out Rick's heart was totally him and was nothing new to him.
    altalt
    The Bored Immortal
    Fantasy · Resurgent
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Commented

    tbh i dont see how this is going but I don't mind entirely

    Ch 2 Finding the light: The beginning
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    GuarDen
    Fantasy · SweeetPotato
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Commented

    Literally no one would say that

    "Hic! Cutie." The drunkest among them, staggered in his drunken state and grinned wickedly as he looked at Barbara: "How about playing with these uncles here. We have money, you are the typical delinquent girl who does everything for money, right?" He saw that she had the air of a delinquent, especially with how she dressed, and said with undisguised lust.
    altalt
    Amon, The Legendary Overlord
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Replied to Retr09007

    It gives the impression that the author is probably 16

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Letter of Recommendation
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    Amon, The Legendary Overlord
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Commented

    The author tries to make the mc look cool but it just makes it extremely cringe. "Omg look how cold he looks" "wow he seems so aloof and cool" like no tf?

    Ch 2 Chapter 2: Letter of Recommendation
    altalt
    Amon, The Legendary Overlord
    Fantasy · Lruska
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Replied to ShadowsFinger

    Okay thats great! I will look forward to the rewrite then!

    altalt
    Level Up Family
    Fantasy · ShadowsFinger
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Commented

    hmm? The rings and now this? Author wyd?

    "Stay safe Sara." Jace acknowledged her with a nod before gripping Malia's hand and leaving.
    altalt
    How I Became the Strongest Sovereign
    Fantasy · TofSpades
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Replied to Retr09007

    Everyone is extremely narrow minded and cant seem to understand anyones point of view other then their own. If the mc kills someone in self defense hes instantly a murder that loves killing people and gets pleasure from it. Its garbage writing. I honestly have no idea why this trash is so popular other then the interesting plot premise. But otherwise its just bad.

    altalt
    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Posted

    The author already started to drag fights out by chapter 33 when the mc could have ended it easily. Everyone except the mc is evil and hates little kids. The people that are evil arent even logically evil. They just hate the mc for no reason. The first reaction we saw in the story was people wanting to literally beat him up because he was a 10 year old orphan and no one even tried to stop them. All of the worldbuilding is done through conversations which leads to random side characters talking way too much about information that isnt relevant for the current situation at that part in the story. There is also the extreme edge coming out of the mc that comes off as cringe instead of cool.

    altalt
    Inhuman Warlock
    Fantasy · Demonic_angel
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Replied to Retr09007

    Nevermind I checked the reviews and it isnt just powerstone botting its even review botting. Insane.

    altalt
    My Post-Apocalyptic Shelter Levels Up Infinitely!
    Sci-fi · Catty Catty Catty
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Posted

    The blatant power stone botting and lack of any sort of originality with this story is appalling. Its the standard copy-paste cheap novel that often gets translated from Chinese authors. I honestly dont understand why webnovel allows this garbage to ruin their site's reputation.

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    My Post-Apocalyptic Shelter Levels Up Infinitely!
    Sci-fi · Catty Catty Catty
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Commented

    his power can be incredibly flawed until he gets another power. If he runs into a race that has no feelings and is kind of like a computer program then he is screwed

    Ch 6 Plan
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    Strings Of Domination
    Fantasy · Gery_
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Commented

    Grammar could use some work. It could easily be fixed with a extension like grammarly.

    Ch 1 Here I Come!
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    Back For My Daughter
    Urban · HaoShu
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  • Retr09007
    Retr090072yr
    Replied to Anti_Fairytale

    Im wondering if its full on slice of life or kind of like a Re:Level 100 farmer style?

    altalt
    Back For My Daughter
    Urban · HaoShu
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