HaoShu
You are at the stage with your grammar where you can write with all the proper tenses, but occasionally you don't place a word in correctly, miss a coma or leave out words that would make more sense in the context of the sentence structure, but I can still understand your writing with relative ease. That is an amazing achievement, and you are so close to having perfect English grammar! Keep at it! If you want me to proofread and show you all the improvements you can make grammatically in this chapter, just leave me a reply! Loving the story so far~~ Time to continue reading.